Sunday, December 30, 2012

Just Wait Until I Sober Up (A Riff) Comments

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Just wait until I sober up
You take me when I'm in my cups
Then I'll unleash my rational mind,
You attack me when I'm drunk and blind.
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David McLansky
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Dave Walker 30 December 2012

Like it, really good flow to it. A great write.

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David McLansky

David McLansky

New York City
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David McLansky
New York City
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