Saturday, January 23, 2010

Just Wait Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes we let our gaurd down
When we think we are in love,
And when we think everything is perfect,
Our hearts get broken.
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Aly Churchill
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C. P. Sharma 23 January 2010

A mature write. There is a typo in the third line of the second staza. CP

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 23 January 2010

Sensible & wise...in appealing lines.

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