Friday, April 27, 2018

Just View The Ocean Comments

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J-ust view the ocean,
A-s waves crash onto the rocks,
I-t's nice to the eyes.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Anjandev Roy 05 December 2020

Great short write......thank u.......anjandev roy.

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Michael Walker 29 April 2018

A most precise haiku and i like viewing the ocean very much. Waves roll in forever as you suggest.

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Dear Michael, thanks a lot for liking this acrostic haikuπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 April 2018

A wonderful acrostic haiku, Bernard. A magical view of the ocean has been painted on the canvas of your great poem.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 April 2018

Thank you so much, dear ate Marie for always comforting me with your heartwarming wordsπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

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Richard Wlodarski 28 April 2018

A great visual haiku, Bernard! I love the ocean! Sea! Lakes!

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Thanks a lot, dear Richard for the heartwarming replyπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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