Tuesday, December 2, 2008

Just Until Midnight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beautiful Girl in the Ball, tell the Prince:

'When I wear my mask,
You keep your eyes on me,
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Kaede Rirunaru
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Aijaz Asif 04 December 2008

quite impressive write and you use the theme of dialogue in it with very strong imagineries.....i liked it thanks for sharing 10... rgds asif

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purple moon 04 December 2008

Yes, the trick is making it to 9am isn't it! if you make it to 10am then you will probably make it all the way back to midnight! well done. x.

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Joseph Poewhit 03 December 2008

Part of love game - trust and the masks

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What a beautiful philosophical fairy tale. It is a truly lovely poem.....Karin Anderson

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Ency Bearis 02 December 2008

a nice fantasy write...well done...beautiful...10 Ency Bearis

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 December 2008

Bagaimana kalau sesuatu yang berlaku itu adalah di luar dugaan kita.Begitu juga dengan cinta.Cinta itu buta, tapi selalunya kita yang membutakan cinta itu sendiri.Ayuh maju terus dong! !

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Kite Remedy 02 December 2008

that's a kind of fairy tale of your own, my friends.. unique and genuine..

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 December 2008

Wow! beautiful! style of expression excellent! ..........10+

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Fiona Davidson 02 December 2008

A very good read...thank you

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Min Sia 02 December 2008

What a lovely piece! It's nice read your new poem! It's beautiful..I like the concept..The way it is written... Great!

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Kaede Rirunaru

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