Friday, March 24, 2006

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Our minds intact...
We stare through cracked glass.
Yesterday I saw children play.
Today I saw a black crow die...
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Lance Carthen
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Brian Dorn 24 March 2006

Awesome poem, Lance! I liked how it rambled but came to a purposeful ending. Brian

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Mineral Wells, TX
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