Sunday, May 21, 2006

Just Too Much Comments

Rating: 3.5

You say I am weak? !
You would be weak too if
you've been through the things
that I've been through
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Evelyn Morianos 02 January 2022

Thanks for sharing your innermost thoughts. Well done you for your first poem. Doesn't need improvement!

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Raymond Herrera 25 August 2008

After Loosing my Sister recently to a tragic accident, The words to the poem really describe the way that I feel inside...Mad, and Sad. This poem helps us to understand that life is often gone way too soon. 'In Loving Memory Of Ashley Parra'

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