Saturday, July 21, 2012

Just Tonight My Monkey Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your smile lifted off the clouds
As we approached our home
You run and skip with such delight
Around all you've ever known
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 13 August 2012

I was wondering how a poem can be so smart. But now I see this work. Yeah, this work is so smart and nice; it's a product of an active mind! ! ! A great poem!

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Harriet James 02 August 2012

This is beautiful, reminding us all to make time for our children. They grow up so fast! We have a huge responsibilty towards them and our actions (or inactions) affect them more than we know.

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Leslie Philibert 21 July 2012

Like this, good rhymes, funny and affectionate poem

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