Thursday, June 30, 2011

Just Today? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just today, can I dream a little?
Just today, can we pretend we are in love?
Just today, can I wish a little?
Just today, can my wish come true?
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Prarthana Ranjit
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Ace Of Black Hearts 30 June 2011

In a dream, a wish, a hope and a prayer exist. It is something we should never miss. It could be nothing or something. All by the choices we make. Whether is of heart ache. Or in the world we to shake. A moment forever in time remembered as the dream. Thanks for the inspiring poem

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 June 2011

Just today I commented on your poem. Great poem with a very strong structure. Nice sentiments and imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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