Saturday, January 3, 2009

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Like a shadow of mine,
i see you wherever i go.
I try hard and fail to keep up the anger
but all in vain, i cry deep within me
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Srita Sri
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Jazib Kamalvi 02 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Srita. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Antonio Liao 13 January 2009

it seems we are fighting to what is me...a reality that confronted with what is beyond of yourself...a feeling of nothing...a nothing to touch...but only a feeling of nothing at all...so nice.... poem...very something of your own.Thank you..God bless

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V F 06 January 2009

wow.. good to see you write again.. :) Do not bury.. do not hide.. for the pain does not really go away.. simply intensifies.. God bless u.. Hope to see some more lovely poems soon.. :)

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