Wednesday, June 1, 2016

Just The First Step Comments

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Just the first step,
that's all you need from me,
once with your hand in my hand,
put your legs on the green pavements,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kelly Kurt 01 June 2016

Everyone on Earth should have a guide such as you. The paths may still be filled with sharp stones but we would navigate them with grace.

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Hazel Durham 01 June 2016

A powerful message in this moving write as to live this life we must have courage to fulfill our dreams from our first steps our parents teach us to be careful, but they must allow us to make our own mistakes and to learn from them. We must never give up and work hard. Your ending is truly beautiful as you give guidance to your child to be independent and enjoy the beauty of this world! Outstanding write!

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Clarence Prince 01 June 2016

Oh heaven! How beautiful! The flowers, the music, the dancing, and with so much love, After this life, I am going there!

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 June 2016

a nice poem, ............................................

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