Tuesday, March 22, 2016

Just The Day I Die Comments

Rating: 4.9

One Day
I Shall be gone...
Gone to that World
Where we had been
...
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Prativa Rani 13 November 2017

I do not know if Time matters or Space.. I only know this, That you would bid me both- Farewell from the Earth and Welcome to that Space! ! Lovely poem shared,10.

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Rani, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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D Priyanka Singh 27 September 2017

Fit to your soft touches Of melancholic Loneliness, Fit to your Hard and rigid shapes and Huge Volumes of Unfulfillment wow, a nicely poem painted with love. Thanks sir for the sharing. 10++++

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DP, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 June 2016

I do not know if Time matters or Space.. I only know this, That you would bid me both- Farewell from the Earth and Welcome to that Space! ! A highly sensible poem. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing this poem.

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Neetu, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 June 2016

I do not know if Time matters or Space.. I only know this, That you would bid me both- Farewell from the Earth and Welcome to that Space! ! A highly sensible poem. I enjoyed it very much.

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Hi Neetu, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Sabita Sahoo 31 May 2016

Fit to Vast Expanses Of your Heart, Fit to deep desires Of your Lives... Fit to your soft touches Of melancholic Loneliness, Fit to your Hard and rigid shapes and Huge Volumes of Unfulfillment. Beautiful. Love it.

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Sabita, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Sarah Persson 13 May 2016

This is a very lovely poem. Fit to dimensions Of your Love, Fit to destinations Of your Soul, Beautiful

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Dear Sarah, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 May 2016

Fit Vast Expanses! Nice piece of work.

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Revered Poet, Thank you Sir for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 29 April 2016

One Day I Shall be gone... Gone to that World Where we had been Before we were born! I do not know if Time matters or Space.. I only know this, That you would bid me both- Farewell from the Earth and Welcome to that Space! ! Your love is tremendous and beautiful. Few people adore their love so passionately. Great poem.. thanks for this one.10 for it. Seema Devi

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Thank you dear Seema for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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