Just The Day I Die Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Just The Day I Die

Rating: 4.9


One Day
I Shall be gone...
Gone to that World
Where we had been
Before we were born!

By the time we meet
I want to remain fit..

Fit to dimensions
Of your Love,
Fit to destinations
Of your Soul,

Fit to Vast Expanses
Of your Heart,
Fit to deep desires
Of your Lives...

Fit to your soft touches
Of melancholic Loneliness,
Fit to your
Hard and rigid shapes and
Huge Volumes of Unfulfillment.

I do not know if
Time matters or Space..
I only know this,
That you would bid me both-
Farewell from the Earth and
Welcome to that Space! !

Tuesday, March 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: destination,farewell,loneliness,love and friendship,soul mates,timeless,welcome
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 13 November 2017

I do not know if Time matters or Space.. I only know this, That you would bid me both- Farewell from the Earth and Welcome to that Space! ! Lovely poem shared,10.

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Rani, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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D Priyanka Singh 27 September 2017

Fit to your soft touches Of melancholic Loneliness, Fit to your Hard and rigid shapes and Huge Volumes of Unfulfillment wow, a nicely poem painted with love. Thanks sir for the sharing. 10++++

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DP, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 June 2016

I do not know if Time matters or Space.. I only know this, That you would bid me both- Farewell from the Earth and Welcome to that Space! ! A highly sensible poem. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing this poem.

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Neetu, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 June 2016

I do not know if Time matters or Space.. I only know this, That you would bid me both- Farewell from the Earth and Welcome to that Space! ! A highly sensible poem. I enjoyed it very much.

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Hi Neetu, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Sabita Sahoo 31 May 2016

Fit to Vast Expanses Of your Heart, Fit to deep desires Of your Lives... Fit to your soft touches Of melancholic Loneliness, Fit to your Hard and rigid shapes and Huge Volumes of Unfulfillment. Beautiful. Love it.

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Sabita, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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