Saturday, September 30, 2006

Just Tell Me When. Comments

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I called you 'mom'
Right from the start;
Little did I know,
You'd break my heart.
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Josephine Adrian
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Carissa Thiessen 28 March 2007

Wow, It sounds so painful, Your words make me feel like I am watching it play out right in front of me, Such a sad sad story, yet unfortuantely it happens more often than we care to realize or aknowledge. My heart aches for you! You are in my prayers.

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Joshua Fegley 18 October 2006

I can emphasize Josephine, I'm from a divorced family too. Later....Joshua

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Melvina Germain 30 September 2006

This is a wonderful heartfelt poem, it's very sad and I feel for you. I hope you share this poem with the person that hurt you so deeply (your Mom) it's hard for me to say but yes (your Mom) --Keep writing, it helps a great deal and you have talent as well. Remember if you walk with God by your side, you can overcome anything, (If he takes you to it, he will take you through it) . God bless you Josephine---Melvina

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Josephine Adrian

Josephine Adrian

Victoria, BC
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