Monday, July 29, 2013

Just Tell Me Comments

Rating: 4.3

What if I said,
I know what is true,
the thing hiding,
deep down inside of you?
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Katherine Bryce
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Katherine Bryce 16 August 2013

Khairul, it's not just that they're making a fool out of them, but also out of me. I mean, because of this silliness, I have to pretend like I don't notice something so obvious. It just irks me when I'm played for a fool.

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Mohammad Khosravi 16 August 2013

that's the only lock, without it's key.. that's the only lock, without it's key. it was the best

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Khairul Ahsan 30 July 2013

Thanks for the note. The poem is otherwise comprehensible, but the note adds to the understanding of it. The only thing I don't know, is when or if you'll tell me, that's the only lock, without it's key. People only make a fool of themselves when they withhold something without knowing that it is known to the person they withhold the information from.

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