Monday, October 27, 2008

Just Teen Ager... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just teen ager
Fumbling for a trail
Some tend to jock
Some tend to mock
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Fasika Ayalew
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 November 2008

Good poem Fasika. Keep on writing!

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Marilyn Lott 30 October 2008

It's very difficult to be a teenager. I remember it well and I didn't know where I was going or how to get there. You described it so well. A '10! ' Keep writing and sharing with us. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

Teen age character is nicely composed. 10 for it.

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Fasika Ayalew

Fasika Ayalew

Ethiopia
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