Tear me apart
Till there is nothing left
Take no prisoners and tell no lies
The hurt that you caused
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This is a really great poem. It really seems like you poured yourself into it. It's really good.
I've been reading your poetry and I see the talent and the strength in you! ! ! Every time you write, your attitude about yourself and ALL the 'good' life has to offer will get stronger. Keep writing and NEVER stop! !
[ those inner conflicts tear us]well-written! ! !