Just Take My Hand Comments

God always knows what is best, the flesh here, over-rode the spiritual. God offered eternal gifts, but man could not see beyond wordly riches. A much inspired poem.Thought provoking! ; D

Will you bring me riches? ' the man asked. 'I will bring you salvation, ' God replied. 'Will you give me fame? ' the man demanded to know. 'I will give you eternity, ' God offered. i like these lines they express more than the poem itself. thanks for sharing

pretty fantastic....liked it.

You are the candle and I am the flame. Take my hand and I will make you shine as bright as the brightest star in the heavens......................... .i am the luminosity redounds to rays earthly emblazons blazing glory of God soul sates by salvation yet divine life transcends as when enlightened..................wonderful write, embarking upon cosmic flow,10+++, thanks for sharing

A good poem - everyone goes thro this at some point in their lives...Reality

good poem, seems that there are many who are faced with that same choice, that comment at the end, well, it was at unwittingly at himself, keep it up: 0)