Monday, September 16, 2019

Just Take It! Comments

Rating: 5.0

A man in need of money, poor and old
is handed a cup filled with coins of gold
But if he refuses to accept and take it
He will remain poor, no benefit
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Aufie Zophy
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David Wood 06 November 2021

Very well penned Aufie. Man will never find happiness with out wisdom. A good 5

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 September 2019

A wonderful poem that imparts wisdom. Each and every stanza is like a treasure to be kept in our mind and heart. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.

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yoonoos peerbocus 16 September 2019

all above finely set/vivid to get the message

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