Friday, December 4, 2009

Just Supposing. Comments

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Suppose this flower I hold in my hand
Could speak of need for presence, reveal
How to exist, with quiet understanding,
Of what being a rose brings to life's zeal.
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Fay Slimm
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Ruth Walters 12 December 2009

A most beautiful poem describing such lovely thoughts....thankyou I enjoyed reading this.... Ruthie

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awesomely said dear fay.

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Bob Gibson 05 December 2009

A scented rose, a sturdy tree, and a rock to comfort thee the rose's life short and free, ten time yours is for the tree! the rock, weathered, by wind and rain has leaned patience in its reign

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Patti Masterman 04 December 2009

Oh my Fay; what a treasure. Was not expecting something so perfectly beautiful and deep. This is a work of art. Thank you; made my day for sure.

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Carol Gall 04 December 2009

wonderful suppose fay if wishes could come true 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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