Just Starting To Write Words Randomly Comments

An extremely good poem.. You just let your mind wander and by doing so all your real feelings just came out and without even trying to write something really good you did anyway

*Standing Applause* Bravo! ! ! This poem was very interesting, I love how it gives a peek into your life experiences, yet you are still able to keep it as a part of humanity with the Ancestor line.10/10!

Wow. This is very personal and introspective. I like how the tone changes throughout. 'I think my justice is served' - what an awesome beginning.