Monday, October 1, 2007

Just Stare At Me Comments

Rating: 4.5

Am I a ghost in the fog?
A teardrop in the rain
Hot magnesium in the sunlight
The anguish in your pain
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Dave Sherratt
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Coll B. Lue 01 October 2007

No you're right Dave, no 'just don't stare at me' - the emotional feel of this poem is deeply felt - I like how you've awaken our feelings. Coll

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