Thursday, June 17, 2010

Just Something That Came To Me In The Middle Of The Night Comments

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little girl little girl what are you crying for
tears funning down your face outside my door
wipes your eyes with all those tear
remember what I told you only 3 more years
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Jamelia Lane
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Marieta Maglas 22 June 2010

very well expressed poem, well penned ideas...

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 22 June 2010

That was nice. I wouldn't feel right if I didn't tell you to edit this poem to correct some spelling errors because I would want someone to do the same for me, but outside of that this was good.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 June 2010

my heart cries in the middle of the night wish you were here and in the sight you tell me over and over it will be okay i love you so much and i told u so this is forever iam never lettin u go your love experience u wrote in a poetic way. thank you for sharing

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Jamelia Lane

Jamelia Lane

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