Just Smile Comments

I know that life had taken a lot from u in a hurry I know that your eyes became red from crying I......... but donot allow the tears to dropp on holy land. it will brinn shame.. lovely poem to be read and to reread.............10 rad mien cry not.... all dreamsnot come true

finely penned the sad fact! smile and move forward.... 10+

No matter how old are you, u don't have 2 forget the past Because it is a part of u, but don't in sadness dive-- > these verses touched my deep... I FOUND MYSELF: this is the thing which changed me completely... SMILE... and it blooms forever...

nice poem..lovely to read...

sure a rich poem and let me share my say about smiles...(a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq) a goo poem.10+++++

maybe i didn't face very big problems in my life till now......hehe............

so true...time waits for no man... shifty about the txt spelling...but I guess that's actually part of the charm. this poem would be my favourite out of yours, I think.

A very true write Zeinab...weel written...10+++

really very nice and true lifes shocks never end

its a good poem... and impressive one, seems to me done in poetic flow.. melodious one.. idea is rich and the expression is also good.. well done.. just continue writing... I like the way you write.. impressive, sweet and wonderful one 10+++++

You are right Zeinab, the life is full of lethal shocks but the most lethal shock is the death..it is so hard to face it..anyway, a great advices from a wise person...good work..Merna