Just Say Goodbye Comments

good write! nice poem! I prefer the last two verses. I like it :)

wonderful job.it reminds me my chidhood when my parents didnt let me do whatever i wanted to do. tnx pal.

poetic justice...nice work pal keep it up dear l was going thru your poems l really enjoyed your poem my boy friend, life vs land&nightmare....keep it up....

A direct 'No' you must say to your lover if he happens to come on your doorway. Great!

How bad your lover is! I wish you will meet another smart guy whom u don't need to say goodbye.

If your lover stands on th doorway of your dreams, thn you hav no choice but to push them aside, as stated in your poem. Good job girl.