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Reading this poem feels like an impromptu piano performance. The immediacy of an improvisation, of an introspection looking for composure. The ending is so very appropriate, trying to get a handle on what you are doing: If it ends, will I be bothered? or will anyone? Well it was an enjoyable read for me. I really felt a sense of creativity through this writing.10/10.

That Was a perfect write and requires no criticism, I hate it, but I love it, I hate it because it is so true and dawns a sad reality but I love it because it is amazing poetry and I can relate 10/10 Tobii

this is my favorite 1 of yours so far... very very nince piece of writing. no question u have tons of talent.

I have just read it and its nice.