Thursday, January 12, 2023

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I can't help but remember
All the times we were together
Now you're gone
A phantom
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Aria Winters
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Amelia Waters 06 April 2023

Rich words.

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Top score, dear poet. Write more and share

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3. Meaning, " By the self thou shouldst deliver the self, thou shouldst not depress and cast down the self (whether by self-indulgence or suppression) ; for the self is the friend of the self and the self is the enemy." So dear poet, you need to lift yourselves out of the "avasadam."

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2. Bhagawat Gita says, " उद्धरेदात्मनात्मानं नात्मानमवसादयेत् । आत्मैव ह्यात्मनो बन्धुरात्मैव रिपुरात्मनः" transliterated as ‘ uddharedātmanātmānaṁ nātmānamavasādayet, ātmaiva hyātmano bandhurātmaiva ripurātmanaḥ'…

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There are times when grief grips us and we feel totally void. But we need to overcome this page too. And it is all upon ourselves to do it..

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