Thursday, December 18, 2014

Just Passing Through Comments

Rating: 4.5

Has God shown you a bit of mercy
When you humbly beg and plead?
Does he know when your heart's been wounded,
Has he ever watched it bleed?
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Lora Colon
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 24 December 2014

Remember, there is one consolation As life's endless tolls become due, Though we suffer, and tears run deep, This won't last..... we're just passing through An excellent poem carrying pains and pleasures of a wonderful relation between man and God.Well expressed Well done 10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 December 2014

Just Passing Through is a poem based on universal truth. God may be realized. Nicely envisioned. Thanks.

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Chuy Amante 18 December 2014

oh yeah, and give the grandkids tons of sugar before sending them home! now that is REAL LOVE they'll remember

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Chuy Amante 18 December 2014

that was easy, a resounding no to all your questions and a YES to the last line! nice work and eat lots of figgy pudding LORA! !

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