Friday, March 16, 2012

Just Out Of Reach Comments

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i loved you once
but you were always
just out of reach
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William Jackson
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Unwritten Soul 17 March 2012

Oh it so sweet, sweetest grapefruit ever! ! hahaha but kinda sad, salty tears the salty grape fruit i ever taste hahahaa :) Beautiful write Will, the melancholy of romantic, bear by a tragic scene....but it's still nice write..like this! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 16 March 2012

Just brave enough to admit that something is out of reach, though the risk was taken once. Enjoyable poem..

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