Monday, February 18, 2008

Just One Time! Comments

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the night lays cold watching the crystal blue lake,
slowly spreading from a world of power,
its colours blue glistening in that golden sun,
its gone for one last time.
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Ashley Reeves (male)(13)
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Elenore Elizabeth 05 March 2008

wow ashley i couldnt write a poem like this when i was thirteen so imaginative

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Fred Babbin 18 February 2008

Not perfect, but very good for a 13 year old.

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