Wednesday, July 31, 2013

Just One Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

Put some music to my words
Make it a song like you have never heard
A song expressing hope and light
Every moment; Day and night
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Lyn Paul
COMMENTS
Rekha Mandagere 12 August 2013

Song and life are moving in perfect rhythm. Brilliant expression.

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Dee Corpolongo 12 August 2013

Oh, I loved this most expressive poem and also your mentioning of my all time favorite, Pink. She says so much in her songs, but this poetic tune is really great and saying so very much... and music is said to calm the beast, so it must hold the magical touch....or so we all hope.... Great poem, Lyn! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 11 August 2013

Just One Song, if you ever sing, make it full out and it be special everlasting! ..lovely one Lyn_Soul

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Mark Dillon 11 August 2013

Then belt it out loud and strong. Sing it so all the world can sing along. Great poem LYN, COULDN'T HELP JOINING IN.

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R.j. Wynn 07 August 2013

I love it when your poem comes together, it's great

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Shahzia Batool 04 August 2013

Good poem of bonding, and strong poets' notes Lyn! ! !

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David Wood 03 August 2013

The one song is love. Love, the most powerful force in the universe.

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Kevin Halls 02 August 2013

An interesting poem Lyn.As a Rock fan I'd recommend something from the Stones or the Who, but sadly your right this world needs a lift but as ACDC sang: We're on the Highway to Hell!

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Valsa George 02 August 2013

Music has healing power! ! 'Where there is music, there can be no evil'....! . So let us sing a song! ! A great write! !

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Valerie Dohren 01 August 2013

What a wonderful song it would be - great poem Lyn.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 01 August 2013

true music as a language everyone understands ah nice poem this is.

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Gajanan Mishra 31 July 2013

with just one song, let us come, good write, thanks.

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