Tuesday, July 19, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

Make these scars bleed,
Make my heart burst into tears.
Look at the pain you have caused!
I wish I could go back and save my soul;
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Marissa Dunken
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 July 2011

It was a wonderful poem composed with great skill. Fine imagery. Conratulations! Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Thanks in advance. Warmest regards Akmal

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