Friday, December 10, 2004

‘just One More’ Comments

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So he sits, candle alight
All of his dreams, torn in a night
He cries for God to hear his plea
‘Please, please give her back to me’
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Emily Moore
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Michael Findlay 28 December 2004

Very good meanning and proves a good point. Well Done.

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Amy Murtagh 13 December 2004

that begins interestingly, makes a good twist Ok, I commented, does it help? xoxox Amy.M xoxox

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