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Just one more day
I ask my brain who forever lives in trance
Just one more day
I ask to give life a another chance
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And he decides to give life another day. - - - - -The poem closes with a positive note and I feel relieved after reading the last line.Suicide takes thousands of lives every year. Depression and frustration take a toll when one feels there no one around to love him and stand by him (Part-1)
A good start with a nice poem, Bobby. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
The cyclone of thoughts in my brain Runs through the infinite time of loneliness DEciding to give life one more day.......... sucicidal thinking........ that destroys. you have very well described what is going on in the mind when someone comes to that point in life. thank u dear poet. tony
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7/25/2025 5:45:55 PM # 1.0.0
He feels worthless and decides to leave the world, a dark place for his existence.But give life a chance...After that moment some one may come who will love him, there may be many people who want to be his friends. Proper counselling at the right moment may save many lives. Thank you for sharing this poem.(Part-2)
Thank you for reading and commenting, its means a lot. proper counseling is the key but most of it is the presence of people around him which matters him most, feeling of wanted is what people crave at such times. Went there, been through and so i vent.
I am glad to know that you have come out strong by overcoming your frustrations. many good wishes to you.May God bless you.