Friday, January 20, 2012

Just One Day! Comments

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if you spent a whole day
watching the way we treat each other,
the way we ignore and turn our backs
on each other...
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Shadow Girl 21 January 2012

Very good words to make one think. This is a well written statement of poetry. Good, meaningful read. -SG

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Theodora Onken 21 January 2012

Wow...your write makes one sit back and really think...it is pretty ugly out there...kinda makes one wonder who really is in charge of this horrific circus we call life! Like the way you write...and your absolute honesty! My Best To You, Theo

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