Tuesday, August 25, 2020

Just Me Comments

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You don't know what It's like to be me.
This façade I display
all you see.
You with lives so complete
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Shaun Cronick 29 August 2020

Lodigiana a poem that doesn't wear a mask. A poem that doesn't p u s s y-foot around. A poem pulling no punches. A poem that's warts and all. And the pic says it all, turning one's back on so called civilised society and humankind. Going it alone. But, things change. I wish you well Lodigiana and thanks for sharing. Take care. Shaun.x.

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Kostas Lagos 26 August 2020

A cry of despair...exceptional!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 25 August 2020

Nice poem. A lot of sadness. Consistent rhymes. Hopefully just a poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 August 2020

When you are feeling lonely such thoughts come into mind. Whatever this is a beautiful write up about what is going on in your mind. Loved the way you have inked. 'You don't know what it's like to just live. People take all the time but don't give.. Life is worthless and black tired of trying to bounce back, I'm just me and I cannotforgive.'.. is very beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

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