Sunday, June 22, 2014

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What's poetic about a foundry worker's son,
Born and bred in Leeds, now idling my time away
In a rinky dink seaside town? What's poetic
About sitting on my laptop reading Facebook
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Paul Butters 22 June 2014

Yes Colleen I nearly rhymed a few times. The lines got shorter towards the end too. Thanks Gajanan.

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Colleen Courtney 22 June 2014

Haha! Love that last stanza! See poetry is inbred in your soul! Even you couldn't help making at least one line rhyme! Amazing how important the internet has become for so many. As for me, can't not stand Facebook! Think I had to set up an acct. to get onto another site once and never went back! Lol. Think all anyone will find on my acct. is my name! But....to each his own huh?

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Gajanan Mishra 22 June 2014

wonderful writing, thanks, I like it. please read my poems and comment.

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