Just Married Comments

amazing write by the two souls yet bound by earthly knot, let there be love blooming at the alter of unison, passionate write as their lives flow across the journey onward being guided by His kindly light, well penned,10+++, thanks for sharing

amazing write by the two souls yet bound by earthly knot, let there be love blooming at the alter of unison, passionate write as their lives flow across the journey onward being guided by His kindly light, well penned,10+++, thanks for sharing

Congrats to them I hope they like this

beautiful work...like the way it reflects how just a mere custom binds two beings, the expectations rising on both the sides from each other, the way how the two become special for one another.. and all this just because of one custom- marriage... amazingly well written! !

I just read your Just Married; and found it to be very inspiring. Marriage is sacred and you made it so in your poem. A very good write. Lynn

it is vary sweet and had a vary good meaning i liked it and how it was worded i hope to hear more soon =)

Well a lovely you made there, I liked it. +10

i likes it (:

I think my favorite line is 'He is your heaven sent, Direct not vent' 10/10

very good. sometimes though i believe marraige has a lot of different aspects to it. i wouldnt know but living in a devorced family and marrying again.... it changes you.: (

‘…He is your heaven sent/Direct, not vent…’ Fabulous lines … enjoyed.... ‘sent’ and ‘vent’ are well chosen… Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK