Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Just Live Comments

Rating: 4.8

Help is on its way
Where that help
May be coming from is unknown
But accept
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Lyn Paul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 September 2021

A brilliant poem.... short, sharp and highly expressive!

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Jennifer Birchall 05 June 2019

Hope is sometimes all we have but it can be enough to carry on. Another wonderful poem dear Lyn.

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Jennifer Birchall 05 June 2019

After reading this a some of your other poems, it inspired me to write a poem called The beach. Thank you dear Lyn.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 January 2016

To be alive and, to live in peace. Nice work.

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Amitava Sur 19 November 2015

The will to live To strive for life Is all that is needed ..... a lovely message is given in this wise poem to move ahead with courage

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Paul Brookes 18 November 2015

A great poem reminding us just live enjoyed

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2015

Remind Yourself... To just, remind yourself Its only life So just live it! - - - - - true dictum.Remind oneself is life. Beautiful Poem. Thanks for sharing....10

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Valsa George 11 November 2015

The will to live To strive for life Is all that is needed............ uplifting thoughts as ever Lyn! This poem brings a current of positive energy in!

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Jak Black 11 November 2015

We sometimes forget how important the simple things in life are to us. We should never give up hope, where would we be without it. I enjoyed reading this philosophical piece Lyn, the window to your heart. Well done.

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Kelly Kurt 10 November 2015

A moving poem, Lyn. Many now, before and after will encounter the same, so live and make the most of it. Thanks for the lift

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Tony Karas 10 November 2015

A truly awesome write my friend. Remind yourself you are alive... LOVE that line!

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Tony Karas 10 November 2015

truly awesome write my friend. Remind yourself you are alive.... a stunning line.

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Tony Karas 10 November 2015

truly awesome write my friend. Remind yourself you are alive....

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