Friday, March 28, 2008

Just Like You! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I glance down and smile
My little girl looks at me
In my best dress and shoes
Red lipstick on her grinning face
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Jacquie StewartHeimann
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 July 2020

I look up and smile My daughter twirls around Her prom dress swirling around her feet So beautiful, so grown-up Look Mamma i am just like you. wishes of an innocent heart. a fine poem. tony

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Federico del Corazón 28 December 2011

good job Jacquie, sounds like you are a good mom and daughter too. please take a look at my Daughter poem

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Ian Bowen 28 March 2008

Jacquie, very strong piece with and evern stronger ending. Well penned. Ian

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