Sunday, July 30, 2006

Just Like Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

You act like we're okay
You act like we don't hate eachother
You act like I should care
You know we're the same.
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Gabriella Franco
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Scarlet Red 09 August 2006

second the motion.. i love the idea and the way it was delivered in this piece.. give you 10 for this ^_^

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Abigail Keller 30 July 2006

The second last stanza is hard hitting and so true. I've had friends who act the same way as magnets- attract when they are different, but when they become the same they repel and it gets a lil scary. I love your idea for this poem, so original and magnificently told. Sometimes, its hard to see yourself reflected in anothers face. ~Amber~

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