Saturday, July 22, 2006

Just Like Dark Water Comments

Rating: ★4.8

The hurt you have caused me,
Bleeds into my soul,
Into everything that is me.
I long to be free of it....
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Lesa MRK
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Patricia Gale 22 July 2006

Pain filled. You have worded this well. Tha last line was grand!

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Séamus Fox 22 July 2006

Lesa this is beautiful. When I read poetry and write it I tend to focus on the language and how it falls into the piece sometimes, as in this case, the feelings echo so much your own feelings can only respond. Séamus

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