Sunday, May 12, 2013

Just In A Little Time Comments

Rating: 4.4

Beyond our mind
Secret of time whispering us
A beginning that we never know
Just in a little time
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Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 August 2017

Wonderful imaginary in a little time. Beautifully portrayed. Let it be quoted.... Just in Short time I just want to be with you I do Beyond our mind Secret of time whispering us A beginning of to somewhere new But when the ending come, i will endure. Thanks for sharing.

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Christopher Tye 23 August 2016

Wonderful poem, funny how life plays with us as we make and lose friends over time as we wonder what might have been.

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Simone Inez Harriman 20 August 2016

Beautiful, haunting poem rich in spirit. Thank you Soul.

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Unwritten Soul 21 August 2016

Very kind words from you dear Simone...thank you and put smile on your face :)

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Lyn Paul 20 August 2016

Very beautiful Soul. Having re read this after 2 years. We come to crossroads in our lives and have to make decisions for a much needed change. Just wishing sometimes we had done this much sooner. Thank You

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Unwritten Soul 20 August 2016

Thanks for reading again lyn, me too sometimes I feel like I want to visit past again and make a huge change... What we can do now is to fight for better days ahead with those memories that still alive.. It will be forever in us

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2016

Congrats for the Beautiful poem of the day. Tides rise and fall, though it washes away the shore, still the memories remains though may be faded by the time as years go on. Beautiful write Soul from your pen. Loved the ink.

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Unwritten Soul 21 August 2016

Its nice to hear from you again Geeta. :) Thanks...you always nice to me

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Tom Billsborough 20 August 2016

Good work and very intelligent ideas

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Unwritten Soul 21 August 2016

Thanks Tom for your time

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Clarence Prince 20 August 2016

I will endure Yes, we need endurance to manage in this life! Thanks for sharing!

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Unwritten Soul 21 August 2016

As time will keep owning our strength, we have to, thanks for reading mine Clarence

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Time, she doth seduce All into her honey trap And none can refuse But fall helplessly into her lap...... Great poem on time......

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Unwritten Soul 21 August 2016

Time...Every beat it lives, time hold us wholly as if it was a soul to a space and matter... :) Thank you dear Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair for your time and beautiful comment :)

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Kelly Kurt 20 August 2016

Many a good friend has faded from my life over time. Such is the nature of life and time. Congrats on poem of the day, dear friend

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Unwritten Soul 20 August 2016

Thank you Kelly, i have not noticing this until you telling me here :) Life is more beautiful with great friends even a nice true friend...but nothing in this world is eternal like memories...and the beauty things we carry with us whenever memories remind us about past... Thanks Kelly :)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 June 2013

A memorable break through the seed of love into the mud.....A sprouting soul nice

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

parting as friends is a special way to part. memories will alwys be pleasant.

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Saadat Tahir 10 June 2013

tender and nostalgic written with great emotion and feeling, a fluid write, portraying the feelings coming forth as the memories and the tears from drenched eyes..... a bit defeatist and lost against the tide of time, sometimes necessary and tangible sometimes just perceptions liked

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Spiritual Seeker 29 May 2013

Time and its hidden secrets..but the brave hearted will not stop but journeyed. Time together and time apart will be remenbered..memories valued. Beautiful write soul...excellent!

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Danny Draper 20 May 2013

Good use of repetition like the ticking of moments. I agree with Diane, it is better to endue and part as friends with good memories.

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David Wood 17 May 2013

Parting can be so sorrowful yet your poem shows the way.

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Ramesh Rai 15 May 2013

Never say END. rest are fine. well versed with a beautiful composition.

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Lyn Paul 14 May 2013

What an amazing write, how a friendships so special can come to an end. A lots something last year and now know it was meant to be. Wow!

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Farah Ilyas 13 May 2013

Endured by me someday When this little times claim From each ticking clock we have spent Spending much in inventing our bond in last seconds.. so true, it happens in life, we haven't worth for our friends but when once we go away from them, their memories rendered our hearts, we want to go back to time, but in vain.such a forceful & emotive poem, again thumbs up

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R.k Das 12 May 2013

please do not give any background to your poems, it takes away the interest of the reader, this reader at least, , plz allow the reader to draw his own conclusion, , , thanx

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R.j. Wynn 12 May 2013

A friendly spirit has been playing the door stops here.

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