Saturday, December 5, 2015

Just I Have Bathed Comments

Rating: 5.0

In this fresh river water
Just I have bathed at dawn
To adore in my pure mind
I have bathed in holy water.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Aniruddha Pathak 02 August 2019

I have bathed in your love.../ in truth / in purity... lovely expressions. We always take care in bathing/cleaning the body. But what about the mind and inner being? This poem brings in lovely insight on this.

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Valsa George 15 July 2019

Mind and body are washed off all dirt and the soul is bathed in God's overwhelming love! The act of purifying is beautifully compared to a bath in the clean waters of a river! Lovely write! A 10

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Thakker Bhupen 07 December 2015

lovely notes on holy water....

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Akhtar Jawad 06 December 2015

In every religion there are certain acts that leave a psychological effect on our thinking. Hindus take bath in the Ganges, Muslims kiss Hajare Aswad, and it works. They regret their sins and a determination with will power they get in return, to remain away from the sins, in future. A great write.

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M Asim Nehal 06 December 2015

Yet another masterpiece...........so many of them useless to count, You are fantastic poet with a touch of MIDAS, thank u so much for sharing wonderful poems, Sir.

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Manonton Dalan 05 December 2015

your father must be very proud of you..thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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