Thursday, September 12, 2013

Just I Am Watching A Race Comments

Rating: 4.5

Just I am watching a race,
Through the window of perception
They are running by God’s grace
As many men so many pace,
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Patricia Grantham 12 September 2013

Everyones always in a hurry. Slow down and take some time to smell the roses and enjoy nature and each other. For we are just travelers all meeting at the same fork in the road. Nicely put my friend. Loved it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 September 2013

Beautiful poem. Great message in it. Where is this race going into? Nowhere...Any way the final touching point is death.. Enjoy some time with nature, enjoy its beauty as well of self too. Good write.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 September 2013

very good write again, all are happy and gay, I like it.

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