Thursday, August 8, 2019

Just How I Feel Comments

Rating: 4.0

As days go by
I run out of time
To tell you just how I feel
Each day I make a promise
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Gary Hembree
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Khairul Ahsan 31 March 2020

'So instead I say how are you? Because as long as I can talk with you There is hope that someday I can tell you, just how I feel for you' - very soft, soothing confession, very naive! Hope, by this time, you could bring yourself up to telling him/her how you felt. Good luck, dear poet! ! !

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 August 2019

May be by composing a wonderful poem on marvels of nature and their impact and it's dedication to the proper entity. Really a thought provoking situation.10 points.

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