Just His Passing Cloud (Rhyme) Comments

A nice poetic imagination, Nisha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

This poem of your shows that you are love struck! The poems is sensitive, emotional, sentimental and truthful lore. Yes love puts up on fame yet the same love may cut smile on the face..Love is a cradle for some but a hurdle to others. very painful expression of feelings. Le me doff the poet for drafting a poem like this.........................

I would also say please do not let your hopes die as said by Seema Chowdhury

please don't let your hopes die......... if it does all the world will end. just hang in there, its a phase that will pass by.

A passing cloud for him can still be a bright sun for the rest of the world. What fantastic poetry you write. Let the butterflies go on inspiring yourself

Very painful poem...