Tuesday, February 19, 2008

Just Grass Comments

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The backyard’s just a plot of grass
Where verdant threads weave tapestries
And blades, like green threads, stitch en masse,
a sod design of symmetries.
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Cathe Ferguson
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Mary Gordley 19 February 2008

Very lovely poem. What I enjoy most is how you take the reader through all parts of the rainstorm and tie the opening line to the last.

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Cathe Ferguson 08 April 2017

Thank you, Mary. I appreciate your compliment.

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