Monday, September 26, 2005

Just Go Comments

Rating: 4.1

I have wandered alone
Through the dust flecked light shafts
of half truths
and undisguised lies
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Gainor Ventresco
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Douglas Scotney 22 July 2015

good, and good luck; but 'resurrected' is correct

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Savita Tyagi 22 July 2015

This poem resonates so well with me. Half baked truths and lies are hard to decipher but once done we stand assured in our own maturity. Well presented poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 July 2015

Full circle with the muse of your adventure. Nice work.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 22 July 2015

Yes, you need to keep going the way your heart tells you to, for God lives in our souls.

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Uriah Hamilton 26 September 2005

What great terms to describe the hope and disappointment of lovers.

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Ulrike Gerbig 26 September 2005

i know so very well what you mean here... well done! u.xxx

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Gainor Ventresco

Gainor Ventresco

Boston, Mass
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