Just Friends Comments

another for Sept.'s showcase. :) bri

my favorite lines [the most 'emotional' perhaps]: And if I try hard enough Sometimes I get mad I just can't figure it out Why it always must end And why they must leave you with We can still be friends friends doesn't cut it usually, i'd guess. when it happens to me (a break-up) , i move on. NEXT! ! ! bri ;) i hope you find love again in a man...............or? to MyPoemList maybe a future showcase? bri :)

Unfortunately life is that way. we make plans, but only God really knows what he has in store for us. wonderful poem full of heartbreak and pathos.

I am impressed. very nicely crafted. Isn't it nice when a poem works?