Each word went piercing down the beats of the heart.
That created millions of ripples in the depth of heart.
With ripples of smiles on her moonlike face
Drank the flood of tears sucked it inside which was,
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Let me repeat, what Dinesh, Tirupathi Sir and Kanav have registered here! A excellent write for which I award you full 10 marks! !
Though prose and verse have got conjoined here, Geetha, you have written an excellent poem here. After all it is the quality of thoughts that counts. Excellent sharing indeed.
Depth of feelings nicely expressed. Picture before blinded eye, ringing tone ringing in deaf ears - beautiful expressions. Thank you.
wow, , an amazing write, , , Trying to forget. But unable to forget. Wished If they could be washed down away with the steam of tears. Wishing to forget each painful thoughts But they keep on reappearing again and again Like a picture to be seen by the blinded eyes. what a write, , ,
Touching the core of my heart.I liked reading it.